Beefy-Ninja's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Incident:001A]

yum!!!

People smoothies all round!!!

[Iron Hedghog Trailer]

nah

This is newgrounds not youtube!
Use flash for this sort of stuff or it just looks bad.
Also spriting is for noob animators if you want to get good use you're own art.
if you fix all these maybe you can improve.

[Rolling down stairs dying]

I wonder

Did you actually make this or did you film you doing it on some game or something?
Anyway you could have at least added a preloader and added an end frame where it actually stops and not repeat over and over again.

MicrowavePotato responds:

I would add a preloader but i couldnt be bothered. and its supposed to be a loop!

Oh and this WAS made in flash but i made it look like it was put together like a game, for fun. took a while to do

[Goku vs Vegeta LSW style]

sprites :(

Sprites are annoying because they're not actually all your work, when goku had the yellow stuff around him you forgot to cut out the blue bit on right hand side and there was bits of blue in the yellow beam as well.
There was no sound effects at all leaving it kinda boring.
If there was any they were very distant and faint.
The animation was ok but i have to rate low going by its hardly your own work.
Try drawing them yourself.
Also the looping and no preloader made it anoying.

supersaiyangoku128 responds:

ok i understand the fact of the only work I'm doing is just creating the flash, I'm really not good at drawing but I'd be better at editing the sprites myself. The sound effects were as I said in description my computer lost em all and i couldnt get em till now. I got to work on the actual animation and the looping and preloading i didn't have time to do :P Thnx for your evaluation I will take into hand what your critism shows

[the side effects of pivot]

not bad

A bit unoriginal.
But good, Choppy in some parts though.
The text in the middle of the screen was anoying has hell remove it.

[tribute strawberry clock]

spanner!

You can't just do that alone for a clock day submission it has already been done by strawberry clock.
Also you're to late clock day is already over and you should learn to make decent flash not just spam a letter b.
This is a rip off not a tribute!

REECEY-BOY responds:

how do know ur right do u relly know y there is a clock day ????

i know i was late and have u seen the real version made by strawberry clock ????

[Steve's World - Pilot]

try harder

seriously newgrounds=flash not garbage made in some site that you dont own,
I'm not being a dick im just telling the truth here. The sound was shit quality.

[M_T - Get Right (Video)]

wow

have the characters had parts missing,
the animation wasn't to good either
try harder dude.

m-t-online responds:

English please?

[Steve's World - Episode 2]

jesus christ

I can't believe this has the score it does I mean come on your using that shitting xtra normal site or what ever its called.
The fact is you didn't even credit the site, you probably would deny even using it.
This site is for flash not some crap where you just type in what they say and the site does the rest.
Save yourself some dignity and delete this and put it on youtube, why? because they like stolen shit.
Another thing you actually are planning on putting this garbage out on dvd!
You'll be probably losing more money than making it.
Stop using this shitey website and go buy yourself flash and make real flash videos not 3d software alternative.
I still can't believe this got through fucking judgement,*sigh* newgrounds is going to hell :(

m-t-online responds:

have you downloaded and used the program?